{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64994068","dateCreated":"1384747858","smartDate":"Nov 17, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64994068"},"dateDigested":1532724202,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC storyboards","description":"Hey Wen,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOf the 4 book covers, #3, of the gallery scene, works the best.  The other book covers make it seem like a drawing app, whereas the 3rd seems to focus more on the business\/networking\/gallery side of the art world, which is where your app operates.  I think the tagline, tho, &quot;Something for artistic you&quot; doesn't really work for this cover.  It should have your logo, &quot;Art Sharing&quot;, and perhaps just go with a descriptive tagline, like &quot;Bringing artists,journalists and gallery owners together&quot; or something like that.  Otherwise its kind of hard from the cover to know what your project is about.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAs for the wireframes and the POC storyboards, I don't really see anything there - no story, no real interface or anything.  Take a look at what other students have done to show how their apps are being used.  Your story should be of an aspiring artists looking for a way to show their work, the gallery owner looking for new talent, and the journalist looking for new upcoming art superstars, and how your app is bringing them all together.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}