{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64993860","dateCreated":"1384746641","smartDate":"Nov 17, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64993860"},"dateDigested":1532724239,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC storyboards","description":"Hey Thuy,
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\nOf the three book covers, I think the 2nd works best. The first is a bit too type-heavy, and the third too much like a pattern. The 2nd feels a lot more personal and with more personality. The main concern for the overall branding from the committee's perspective might be that you're borrowing very heavily from the "Monster's Inc." brand, from the eye logo to the monsters themselves, so be prepared to defend that.
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\nThe wireframes and storyboards are very charming, and the illustrations look great. I like the overall story of Tim, with 2 dads, asking them where babies come from. It's very "Modern Family" and progressive. The walkthrough of the video, from the dads freaking out, downloading the app, and the UI screens go through all work great. My only possible concern would be that it seems like a very static, one-time use, Game 1.0, type experience. I know that this is for very young children, and that most educational games and apps are like this. However, if the committee asks what makes it innovative from a UI or technology standpoint, what are you going to say? Other than it's a subject matter that is not well represented on the App store, what is about the interaction and the technology thats really innovative?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}