{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64993608","dateCreated":"1384745554","smartDate":"Nov 17, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64993608"},"dateDigested":1532724318,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC storyboards","description":"Hey Shital,
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\nOf the book covers, I prefer the last. The overall brand message is how the product enables someone to have a safe, successful adventure, and the image you chose for this cover definitely conveys that. The others are too abstract and don't really tell the story of what app does.
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\nThe wireframes look great, but please make sure that in the book and the presentation that you include details about the scenario, and what is being shown on each screen. The committee might have an issue with scope, and ask you to choose a single platform - if that's the case, which would prefer to do, watch or phone?
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\nAs for the storyboards, I like the overall story of Mustafa and his friends going on a climb, and how the apps (watch & phone) are enabling them to engage, share and have a safe adventure. How are you thinking to integrate either the video or photography with detailed screens of both app and phone UI's? For example, when the character points the watch to take a picture, will you zoom in on the watch interface to show us what is going on? Perhaps with the view of the mountain blurred in the background, and detailed on the watch? Also how are you going to convey the story - with subtitles, or with voiceover? Will it be primarily photography, actual video, or illustration? Of the three, I would prefer photography, as it would be the easiest to produce. Unless of course you're planning to bring a video camera on an actual climb. Don't use illustration, as I think amazing stunning vistas of mountaintops are better than cute illustrations in this case.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}