{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64993464","dateCreated":"1384744935","smartDate":"Nov 17, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64993464"},"dateDigested":1532724416,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC storyboards","description":"Hey Ruohan,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThere needs to be a LOT more detail in the wireframes.  Given that you want to target a young audience, how is the interface of the app appealing to them?  How are you reworking the typical email interface into something that's fun to use, allows for a lot of customization and engagement?<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOf the three book covers, I prefer #1, its simple, clean, and I like the soft colors.  Be careful of using just this color scheme tho, it might wind up being hard to read on a projector.  See if you can include some stronger accent colors for legibility and to make things pop out.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFor the POC storyboards, I can't really tell what the story is.  I see cute drawings of a young girl, but I don't get a sense of what her issues are, how the app is helping her, and what's cool about the app itself.  The story should be about a young woman, who is overwhelmed by all her various email accounts, how Deer Mail is bringing all her communications together, and allowing her to communicate  in a fun easy way.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}