{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64952988","dateCreated":"1384477264","smartDate":"Nov 14, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64952988"},"dateDigested":1532724503,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC concept","description":"Hi May,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOf the 3 books covers, I prefer the 3rd - the first seems a bit too childlike and simple, the 2nd too abstract.  i would almost prefer a cover with a full image of the some image of all the people doing the Hajj.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe storyboards don't really justify why the app is on a mobile device.  I would include in the story the fact that Ali is already in Mecca, and needs the app to help him get around and do the steps properly.  Also please include in the story how he is sharing his experiences, and perhaps communicating with other pilgrims, otherwise it just seems like a static, educational app, which the committee hates.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFrom a design standpoint, please include some other colors than just brown, grey and black.  Perhaps these are the colors that are associated with the Hajj, but it seems kind of dull and lifeless.  Include at least 2 other colors for more vibrancy and for contrast.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}