{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"65011300","dateCreated":"1384807733","smartDate":"Nov 18, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65011300"},"dateDigested":1532724515,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC storyboards","description":"Hey Maryam, sorry for missing you last week.  Here's my feedback:<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOf the 3 book covers, my favorite is #1.  I'm not crazy about the dotted line treatments on the others.  If you want to do a different treatment, show a scene from a shopping mall, and the popups someone gets when they walk by.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe wireframes you have look fine in general - they can all be combines into a single walkthrough, for the couple in your personas for example.  The UI seems a bit typical though, see if you can come up with a more interesting interface\/paradigm for how someone discovers\/navigates through deals contextually as they are walking around a shopping area.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe POC boards look fine, although there need to be fairly detailed closeups of the application.  You can start with zoomed out views of the couple, then zoom in to the interface as they use it.  You're planning on using a photographic treatment yes?  How are you planning to tell us what the couple is thinking - with a VO or subtitles?  Try and have a strong ending as well, something that summarizes what &quot;Walkby&quot; did for this couple on their night out.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}