{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64952866","dateCreated":"1384476849","smartDate":"Nov 14, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64952866"},"dateDigested":1532724563,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback on wireframes, book covers and POC concept","description":"Hey Mariya,
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\nOf the 3 book covers, I prefer the 2nd one - its the simplest, cleanest and can accommodate all the additional info you need to add, like your name, date of presentation, etc. It's also easier to see the "P", vs. the other 2.
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\nLooking at the new storyboard, I'm happy with the overall direction. It shows the user "Ben" what his problem is, and how the app helped him get a raise at work. The main concern the committee is gonna have is whats cool about the app, and how its taking advantage of the mobile platform. The fact that he has it with him as he's walking to the train is a good reason, but point out how the app is taking data from Caltrain to determine how fast he needs to walk. In the technical specs, point out how your app is using the accelerometer to determine speed, and GPS to determine location. That will make Dave and Ryan happy. How are you thinking to produce this video - it seems like you want to use an illustration style? If yes, that is a lot of work, but would really match the style of your book covers.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}