{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64952728","dateCreated":"1384476308","smartDate":"Nov 14, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64952728"},"dateDigested":1532724570,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback on storyboards, book covers and POC concept","description":"Hey Lu,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFor the book covers, I prefer the 3rd.  The first is a bit too soft and looks like a Hallmark greeting card, the 2nd seems religious, but the 3rd is quite striking with that photograph.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe wireframes seem like they are missing a few steps, in that they are only showing one screen per section.  I'm also frankly not seeing what there is about the app that's really cool from a technology standpoint, and why it's on a mobile device like a tablet.  Could I use the device to scan the barcodes of my medicines so I don't have to manually enter the information?  The wireframes seem like they're on a table, but the storyboards look like a phone - just pick one platform for now.  There is also not enough contrast - I'm having a hard time seeing it on a desktop monitor, and it will be almost invisible on a projector.  Increase the contrast so that it will be more legible during your presentation.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFor the POC, I like the story structure of starting with present day and the patient is free of cancer, then flashing back to when she was diagnosed and how the app helped her deal with her sickness.  How are you planning on doing the video?  With real video vs. photographs vs. illustrations?  From the 3rd cover, it seems like you would be using still photography which would be easier, but I'm thinking an illustration approach would make it more universal, but would is harder to do.  Also show in the video why it's on a mobile device - like she's at the doctor's office, vs. at home.  If the patient is at home, why wouldn't they use a desktop or laptop, vs. a phone.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}