{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64952582","dateCreated":"1384475606","smartDate":"Nov 14, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64952582"},"dateDigested":1532724591,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback on storyboards and POC concept","description":"Hey Irene, I am very very pleased with your work.  Out of all the students in the class thus far, I give you the best chance to pass first try.  My only possible suggestion would be pay attention to the scope.  You are showing 7 top lvl categories, and 9 subcategories, for 84 possible choices.  Make sure you point out in your presentation that you are only doing 1\/84.  Also, rather than him posting a photo, how about a video instead?  Video &gt; Photo.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAs for the book covers, I'm most drawn to the first, simplest one.  The second makes it seems like its for outdoor adventures, the third is a bit too complicated, and doesn't feel like a cover, but more of an internal diagram.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMy last piece of advice is to make an appointment with Dave Kantor, and see what he suggests as far as how to code your idea.  What API's to use, front end vs. back end, etc.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOverall, awesome work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}