{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64897022","dateCreated":"1384292179","smartDate":"Nov 12, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64897022"},"dateDigested":1532724594,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on book cover and storyboard","description":"Hey Fonda,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nOf the book covers you show, I prefer the last one, with the 4 symbols going across.  My one recommendation would be to remove the complicated gradient\/pattern behind it and keep it clean and simple, with a warm but neutral color in the bg.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI love the overall framework of the storyboard.  How are you thinking to produce this visually?  With photography or illustration?  I very much like the illustration style of the icons, so perhaps use this same style and illustrate your video?  I know that's a lot of work, but it would match stylistically and illustration makes things more universal vs. personal.  I imagine using your voice, some light happy music, and an illustrative style of video working very well.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMy only other concern is lack of detail of the UI\/UX in your storyboards.  Other students have failed their reviews due to lack of detail of the user experience\/UI, and I don't want that to happen to you.  Please include some screens of what the app looks like as someone is going through a health-related crisis or problem, and how the app is helping them.   I like the overall high level tone of the storyboard, but it also needs to delve into some details.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}