{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64896776","dateCreated":"1384291295","smartDate":"Nov 12, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64896776"},"dateDigested":1532724611,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on book cover and storyboard","description":"Hey Fatimah,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe three book covers you present are way too similar to each other.  The point of doing 3 separate covers is to try and convey 3 different themes, not just rearranging the same elements around.  I would like to see one cover that has lots of talk bubbles, to imply how people are talking and sharing their work\/life experiences.  Maybe another has lots of images of people in a mosaic to show how the broad spectrum of professions and users of the app.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nMy main problem with the wireframe is that I don't see anything interesting or engaging with the interface - it just looks like a forum, and a bunch of boring text.  I know this seems difficult for you to think of how to create a more experimental interface, but try and imagine what jonathan harris would do with your UI, like what he did with We Feel Fine.  I strongly urge you to think more along those lines, vs. creating some kind of education forum - that idea won't pass.  Think of a cool, engaging interface for navigating a huge collection of experiences, with text\/image\/video in a non traditional way.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe storyboard you present is too educational and typical.  It should be less about the user reading some advice, and more about sharing his work experiences, then discovering a huge community of people with similar experiences.  make sense?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}