{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"64896588","dateCreated":"1384290793","smartDate":"Nov 12, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"alexpineda","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/alexpineda","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1235537837\/alexpineda-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall2013643.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64896588"},"dateDigested":1532724625,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback on wfs and book cover","description":"Hey Chia Chia, i prefer book cover #3 - the simpler, cleaner one with the pattern on the bottom. Please make sure you add the info on the cover from the guidelines.
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\nMy main concern with your project and wireframes is that your not really presenting how "Patt" adds value to someone's life. When you talk about your thesis, you say that Patt is just a fun app for making patterns. You need to present a stronger argument for why we should care about it. How it adds color to a boring, dull life, and how you can gain inspiration from the word around you. I'm not sure if you remember the concept I thought up in our makeup class, of someone living a dull, grey life, then he opens Patt, and suddenly the world is filled with color and vibrancy. You need to have a much stronger story than the one you're showing, or else you won't pass.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}